I finished my
femgenficathon entry, but I need a beta. It's a Roxy POV. I need some definite grammar/punctuation/characterization/plot hole look over. The whole nine yards on it. It's only about 1400 words, and it's from a prompt. Set about 1.5-2 years before the series starts, so Finn is 2-2.5, TJ 4-4.5. For time frame reference. So, help please?